Caveman’s Daydream

September 10, 2008

09.10.08

misery carved into our faces
	we line the platform
waiting for the train
	sunlight happily smiling down
oppressive heat
	igniting humidity
as we try desperately to look
	tortured to be alive.
I look behind, down the terminal
	at the standing masses
stretching for eons
	and see decrepit cripples
clutching alms
	corpses rotting in the rain
cadavers and bones
	strewn like Froebel gifts
dust blasted by dry winds
	onto our granite slab
receding into a shallow sea
	its frothy surf washing up
the dead.

the train arrives, the doors hiss open
	and choking on a sickly sigh
take my step check my watch
	quartz hearts resonate with ours
the door gulps closed and we depart.

One Response to “Caveman’s Daydream”


  1. “A poem,” said John Ciardi, “is a machine for making choices.” But this poem makes all the choices for us…you tell us, rather than show us, all the values your symbols carry.


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